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i whipped this up for phoenix wrong's last stand, and apparently it was rejected by assford. since other people have been successful with thier own easy to make spritefest, i figured i might as well submit this.
I'm going to say I actually liked this one. The concept of Sal Manella getting with April May is funny, and then him discovering she has syphillis is even funnier. This has a full-out pardody potential right there.
However, I can see how it could have been better. You show the Judge, Phoenix and Edgeworth moving their lips when it probably would have been better to have them nodding or just listening (Edgeworth tapping his finger on his arm). Also, the audio track could've been clearer.
Needs some work
I'll be constructive here.
Color: It seemed very washed out, kind of like a shirt that got washed way too many times.
Synching: It seemed to be off in several places.
Graphics: The moving graphics overlapped the background in a few places.
Audio: You picked a good clip to animate too. It's nice and random.
It's not bad but could have been better. I've read in your other responses that you didn't put much effort into it. If you had cleaned it up a bit, who knows? It might have made it into the collab.
no, it's because i didn't use a popular song and i'm not an established pillar of the NG community, i'm just some guy with a big stick.
You were rejected BIG WOOP. Its not that good anyways.
it's not like i wanted to be pals with ashford or something.
yea it is kina boring but hey at least you tried right?
barely any effort here, but apparently it had too much effort. the thing the real phoenix wrongs do is import the sprites from a collection of animated .gifs from a website, they're already in order and there is little else work to be done but i tried to apply the technique i used to use to make normal sprite movies (i hate doing those they're so fucking boring to make and even worse to watch)
that was ermmmmmmmm...... uhhhh ..... funny
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