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This was my first animation with "Jack", the walkcycle is very bad, but maybe you like the plot ;)
(( CUTE ))
Cute animation, abit on the short side though, but i had fun watching it, if i can suggest anything it would probably be to add more content and some color for that extra effect, anyways nice job, keep up the good animations.
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Here are a few things i suggest, Well while its black and white, you may want to think about adding some color even just a drop here or there, like say a blood drop so that the B&W reflects more it would be a nice touch of little color vs the B&W, Since it was so "SHORT" I would suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see.
Overall it was a cute and amusing flash.
A neat movie with a good moral too...I guess. But more entertaining that not. I liked the sound effects, they were very unique, and of course the storyline was very interesting. I enjoyed watching this movie.
You may want to consider coloring things in a little bit, things without color to me just look really bland.
i liked the flash it was really cool
I liked this flash. I liked the graphics and style, although like you said, the walk cycle wasn't the best. I like the background muisc and sound effects. However, I didn't really udnerstand what happened. What does this have to dow tih a jack in the box? Anyway, cool flash, keep up the good work!
haha I like this! good job
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