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Some Red Thing

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Nov 27, 2006 | 1:18 PM EST

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This is my very first flash,I thought of submitting it cause,well,you gotta start somewhere,and I think this is a fair beginning....

...Well,you'll be the judge of that.



Rated 2 / 5 stars


^^Good Points^^
A neat little storyline you developed here. I agree that this is a good start. You had pretty good animations in this and the storyline was creative and funny. I guess it could go on forever...

^^Needs Improving^^
In the beginning I noticed it doesn't really look like they guy is moving forward. You should add something in the background in order to simulate movement as well. I thought the ending could have just been a slight bit longer to exemplify what I said above.


Rated 2 / 5 stars

okay one

it was an alright animation... alright for a first animation, but this one was way too short and really could've had some more to it. your drawings were alright, but i think that some more could've been done to this one... a plotline of some sort probably would've been the best for this one.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

Not bad for a first.

For a first flash, this isn't bad. Though it's too short and the sound needs to be rethought.

Good job, keep practicing.


Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

More effort needed.

More effort is needed, higher framerate.
Better graphics and animation.
Better quality sound perhaps less high volume.
And most of all longer.


Rated 4 / 5 stars

Cute (I never thought I would say that)

It was though, nothing else came to mind. I actually really liked it, I hope it stays with us. And this was a very goos start.