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this was really my first completed completed flash.
I feel nostalgic towards it and leave it on newgrounds because it was a learning experience, and I love to look back on it and see my improvements.
That is so cool.
I like the music, I like the story, I like the action, I like it all. You should make more. You're more than good enough, in my opinion!!
Better than what I expected!
I must say that I've been impressed by this flash!
The drawings are pretty good, maybe they are a bit choppy sometimes (I particulary didn't like the arms), but those are minor flaws that you'll soon solve in future works ;)
The movements are pretty good aswell. Not so good is the lip-sync, but nothing too serious. Also, some movements aren't that well executed, but most of them are ok. I liked the job you did with the glows. You only use them when necessary, good job with that!
The song fits with the flash, nothing else to comment about that.
Seeing some random and pointless fighting is always good if well executed, and this is the case, great job! :D
Looking foward more!
I enjoyed that one thoroughly lol the music was kinda catchy :x
I like the art style you used (mario looked a little short for his height), also while watching the video, it looked like you based some elements on Naruto, DBZ & One Piece (not a bad thing), also I liked the video credits, the only part I didn't really like about the video was when a scene appeared and toad would always say yeah, other then that, great video (Toad is my 2'nd favorite mario character, with luigi in 1'st) also after watching the video it gave me another idea for a flash video
That was pretty cool with all the Toads singing and fighting Mario,excellent graphics and it was pretty cute too. =P
A short film about a park bench
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