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A short Flash film about Dots and trampolines. Prequel to Dots 3, let me know what you think!
please review and give me your feedback =)
Music by Tax 5 "Forest" (edited by me)
Well I must say these are kinda cute and you add the right music to keep them at a pleasent level of enjoyment, some of the details and effects are somewhat old but I can understand all that, all in all this was amusing.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Well I would suggest the play and replay buttons but I already told you that in a prev review, make these longer would be anonther plus.
Even less filesize than the previous one, and still so much comedy. Graphics could be a bit better, but I know they do get so in due time, nevertheless this is funny, very. Keep it going!
Poor Pink Dot, Blue Dot got angry with him/her.
Great Sound for it, Animation was great!
Keep it up!
...its not his fault!
Maybe the sky would look better with linear shading- its quite easy- take a look at my Art Tut. Then it would mathc the effort you have put into shading other things, like the dots themselves.
Who new some circles could make good flash?
Well. When I first click on, "Watch This Movie" and I saw those circles...I was kind of off the edge. But you actually pulled through and now im quiet interested. Although it was short it still was pretty funny and even though they were just circles the graphics were good :)
Overall - Nicely Done 4/5
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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