good!
Ummm it was good just use better animation.
Author Comments
Well, i've tried submiting some others before, but this is the best i can do at the moment. So if you don't like it, (PLEASE DO!!!)reveiw it insted, and i'll try to make it better. If you like it, vote it a high number. I might put you as a favourite! But then you have to have to have a submission yourself. Everyone who makes this possible to stay on Newgrounds, YOU RULE!!! (By the way, you HAVE to over 13 to watch this. Only teenages can watch this because it has something that only them can see and don't make an account and your under age and you see it)
El-Jameo responds:
i know but that is all going to change because people who know green day im making a animation of the song "hoilday"...
Im sorry but this was just awful
No real efort put into the sound was terrible and really no good things about it, i dont know how the hell u got in but u shudnt have there have been better things that dont make it than this.. u need to have better quality sound and spend more time drawing, i mean stick figures thats just stupid.
El-Jameo responds:
this was the first animation i made
hmm, good idea, badly done
actually i agree with the last guy, it was bad, but it had a great storyline thats the only reason why it got in (it had style and could of been quite funny with more work), work harder at the idea and ditch the stickmen idea and actually make graphic...
Congrats in getting in, you where extremely lucky though
El-Jameo responds:
yeah it could of been better, but the next one im hoping has voilence in and a ferrit animation will soon be coming out
Okay, wtf.
What is with people being so generous with these things? A SEVEN? Come on, there was barely any sound and nine-tenths of the movie was random pictures. There was next to no work put in this, don't encourage more. Work more at your actual flash work, not just a poorly drawn stick figure with a trembling lip as a speech movements. A zero.
El-Jameo responds:
By the way, just don't bother by telling me it sucks.
er...
the sound needs improvment and the graphics ...nice pics though,this was ok i guess...
El-Jameo responds:
Thanks. the sound does need improving and the graphics.
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2.00 / 5.00
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- Nov 26, 2006
- 5:27 AM EST