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For now watch this one for historic purposes.
I really like your style of art. It has almost no boundaries and the story tell is so deep. This is one piece that I can watch today, tomorrow, and a many years from now. It continues to assure me of the angry and unforgiving times our world is in. I really hope you decide to make part 2 and 3.
My god man you are getting better and better at flash.. You create such a surreal.. spooky.. world. It looks so.. paranoia.. You are awesome at setting the mood. It was so creepy, you inspire me alot dude.. I mean whoah! Great use of voiceacting, soundrecordings and music. Some scenes take a little too long(like where he gives the white rose drink and takes his hand back really slowly). I can see that it is to set a mood, and make it creepy and suspecting, but it could also take a little too long and bore the watcher, you see? :3
GR: 10, I loved the graphics dude.. they were awesome. Animation could be a little better here and there.. like the running part^-^
ST: 10, I love your style, its awesome. Its creepy but not horror.. its.. dont know, but its really impressive and you just cant forget your movies. Kinda like Saladfingers, but different, creepier, in a bad-trip kind of way..
SO: 9, You worked hard on this didnt you? Own recording and lots of effects, also the music, lots of editing, and with great results!
VI: 6, Not alot of blood, fighting or gore, but there is SOME violence.
IN: 2, Play and Replay included.
HU: 0, None
OV: 10, Very impressive and trippy piece, I love that.
it was beautiful
a white rose is symbolic for honor and reverence as well as innocence, so for the enemy soldier give an american soldier that bottle shows his compassion and his loyalty to a lost code of warriorship. then the general puts the enemy man to death when the man has no defense or even agression which is (understatingly) dishonorable. then, in london, a man who seems to be of high status tells a transient the wrong time intentionally. looking at the title and then the piece itself, i would say that is about the perfection of brotherhood or perhaps better put kinship that the world once had. the same equality that the fathers of the united states dreamed of but that was lost along the way. you definitely have a powerful voice which i greatly admire. keep it up!
p.s. i just now read what you said below, and i incourage you to definitely continue this story! i'd love to see where it is taken
That was surreal.
I do love surreal things, and this is something I'd watch just to give me the chills. It was kinda creepy at some parts...
I liked the animation and the strange sound effects. The music was good too. (I liked all of it, not just mine. :P)
Adding to my faves.
I like your flash alot. They all seem to end up being quite dark and surreal. :)
Your works are unique. Although I don't know what was really happen but I just love the feeling. You have very good skills.
*add to favourite*
An indirect Sequel to "The Artist" shows the life of the salaryman
Cornelius & Toots are back, and a Haunted House Ride seems a little spookier than usual!
this one isn't funny
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