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Shara epi1 (Intro)

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Nov 24, 2006 | 1:48 PM EST

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The intro of myflash movie "Shara - In the Beggining"
Full version will be out in time, it will either be in sprite, or as it is here, i still havnt decided, watch and enjoy... i added tht weird music coz i thought it went well, and notice the heartbeats in the flashbak when she is a little girl, im proud of myself =P i think my effects are nice as well, especially when she is cryind, sorry this has become more of a documentry, oh well... ENJOY!!!

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FattyWhaleFattyWhale

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

K

^^Good Points^^
This intro looks like you are a promising Flash artist. The storyline seems very interesting, something that I would definitely like to see. The graphics were very detailed and looked great. I hope you do release the full version some day.

^^Needs Improving^^
The text moved a bit fast, and I didn't get to read most of what was spread on two lines at once.



ZeppekkZeppekk

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Oh, that's just kickass.

honestly, that is awesome, make the series, and you will have a place in the top 50.


iVisual responds:

woah you rly think? thx m8!


DanteMayCryDanteMayCry

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good Start.

This could actally turn into a popular series if you work on the anime details of the chars. Also the words went by too fast so it's kinda hard to read for slow readers.


iVisual responds:

ok thx for the review m8


WisdomVsLogicWisdomVsLogic

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

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so you're an anime cartoonist like me
well here are the gaps in the movie:
the face wasnt shaped as it should. To help, go to Deviantart, and look up Anime Tutorial, the head shaping should help alot. Also, the eyes were good, but the hair was too plain to say it was real, when the eyes were, making the eyes and the hair clash. I put a 5 for the style, because the idea of the movie seemed incomplete, and not enough of it was told to give the audience a fairly good idea of the plot or the settings.


iVisual responds:

ok, thanx for the help m8!


zyzyzyzy

Rated 4 / 5 stars

kinda cool

the graphics were clean and the shading was kinda good although i would like to see more of the animation then the words at the end but,... the words moved to fast to read most of them so try to slow them down for slow readers. :D

I hope to see a full movie from you with a good plot

good job 4/5


iVisual responds:

thanx m8 for the great review, yes i am working on the full version very hard and i am hoping the release will be within the next month, so hope fully i nice xmas present for NG!