Score: 6
"do more and polish"
date: November 25, 2006
+++++ I love to see folk using text for pictures.
---- I think you maybe should've extended that into all the spikes/rock/chainsaw etc.
+++ Start of story was interesting, with kinda-shared name.
---- I found the second act of the story a bit tiresome and confusing. I didn't realise he was on about YuGiOh until he mentioned it. It didn't amuse.
-- ugly bg. where are they meant to be anyway? Poor drawings. The KM looks good for a tutorial to give some slight texture, but not for a movie.
+++ Various stock sounds used for comic effect were interesting.
+++ Great song to finish.
++ Lovely outlines on the stressed font.
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Interesting and kinda fun to watch.
I think you should do more and polish up your style! Tell more stories maybe? Try more things?
In any case, stay funky.
Author's Response:
---- I found the second act of the story a bit tiresome and confusing. I didn't realise he was on about YuGiOh until he mentioned it. It didn't amuse.
Oh, well you weren't supposed to trealize it was Yu-Gi-Oh unitl then. Anyway, thanks.
-- ugly bg. where are they meant to be anyway? Poor drawings. The KM looks good for a tutorial to give some slight texture, but not for a movie.
Yeah, the KoolMoves watermark is annoying, but waht can I say? I noyl have the Demo! It was supposed to be an 'arena'.
Thanks for the great review!
.frenZy.