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Hey NG, this is my very first flash interactive movie, it's basically a linier interactive story telling, please leave helpful critique so I can make my next one better!
This is a tribute to the awesome site below, and the great work the brave photographers do!
Pictures from http://www.abandoned-plac es.com/
P.S. Sorry there's no preloader! ^^;
way too easy
the only thing you can do is click and read and that makes it too easy
It wasn't really meant to be a "game", it's more of an interactive story.
I know it's a simple game, but it is my very first game. =]
I actually liked it the way it was
However, it would have been cool if there were moments in the story where you could branch off, you know where you had different places to explore. Cool game though, and the art was simply fantastic, the music was unsettling and no damn jump scares, it instead made me uneasy, something I wish was done more in creepy games.
Thanks very much for the review, it's nice when people leave you a nice message. =]
I am going to work on a second version, with branching paths and possibly items that can be picked up, so you can find other secret/hidden paths that lead to different endings.
that was an alright game. an original idea to it, but i think that it could've been extended a little bit more though. there could've been more to this one.
Thanks for the review! I know this is short, but this is my first flash game, and I will be starting on another one soon.
you coulda put more in
you should have added picking up items to get through things, all you really had to do was click on the arrows,it got kinda boring after a while, but yeah still pretty good job
Thanks for the review! I plan on making another game with objects that can be picked up, but just remember, this is my first flash.
nice job, but way too easy mabye you should get more pics an rooms.
Thanks for the review! I know it's easy, but this is my first flash, so you need to at least give me some credit...
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