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Thought I would make this small flash movie. Its a typical Australian boy as you might be able to relate.
The graphics were pretty good. The drawings weren't the best, but they served their purpose and were better than anything I can draw. I liked the song you picked as well.
The song was good, but I couldn't hear the voice overs very well. I'm pretty sure I missed a bit of the storyline because of this, and I definitely missed what was said at the ending. You should really consider revising this.
The sound was a bit too low...
The music was fine, but the voice sounds were way too low. I could only hear a bit of the voices, but I couldn't hear most of it. The graphics were fine, not the best, but it's okay. The Red Bulls, the table, and the bed weren't drawn the best, but this wouldn't get blammed so easily. Keep up the good work and keep learning ^_^.
could be better
i understand you dont want a low score but lets face it,no one wants to watch a movie about some lazy jerk.no offense meant
You could barely make out what the voices were saying, because of the music.
It looks like he hasn't got much of a room to clean, still, good work.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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