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Travis returns from space to meet up with an old friend.
It wasn't bad. I did in fact like it. You have improved compared to your past submissions. You seem to like looping the mouths a lot though. Except on a few parts where they were animated very well. You're improving. ^-^
it was an alright animation. nice voices in this one, nice joke and a cool idea, though i think that this one could've had some more work done to it. the graphics were a little poor and it was overall a little boring. your efforts were good though, but i think that some more could've been done to it.
could use soem work in some parts though, but altogether.i like it.
OK but not great
+some good graphics
+good lip sync
Maybe its just me but...
Were we supposed to know these people? Was this story supposed to make any more sense than just someone coming home from space and not being missed?
I didnt get that other guy who just appeared for a moment. Wa that just random?
I didn't get the repetition thing yep yep yep?
I guess most people know the music is Johhny B Goode, but you should still put it in the credits, especially since there are ship loads of versions of JBG- that was the Chuck Berry version, yes?
the other guy was a cutaway, the repetition thing is half parodying king of the hill, it is the chuck berry version.
And a miss... SO CLOSE...
Nice animation, lip-synch, good sound... but it means nothing if the best thing you could come up was 'Hey, I was in outerspace.' I liked 'Johnny B. Goode' though.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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