Tired of waiting?
Click here to disable ads!
You are not logged in. If you sign up for an account,
you can gain additional voting power over time, allowing your vote to have an even
greater impact on submission scores!
My First Sumission to get Front Page!
*yawn* Just getting some practice under my belt. If you don't know who the characters are, watch my other two cartoons (preferably the first one). Enjoy. WATCH ON MEDIUM OR LOW QUALITY!!!
That was pretty good, i liked the story and the "moral" at the end. and to the guy that thought that it was wierd that they were always smiling, i think it could've been a way to represent the fact that they think they're bad-ass and that they could take anyone.
I suppose I could, it's just that the fight wasn't meant to be serious, that ain't the tone I was goin' for. but thankz, I love morals too XD
Not too shabby
Kudos, bro. I personally love anime, and I could since a bit of Aaron McGruder-esque influence in your style, especially the facial profiles. I enjoyed the concept and stylization of the characters, although some of the scenes could have used a few more frames. While its not necesarry to draw out every single movement (as you are no doubt aware) there are some points where there the action looses its fluidity and seems to "jump" from one motion to the next without clearly defining what happened in between. Otherwise, great job, and I'd love to see more.
Read through some of the other reviews, and I have to give you props on your level headed responses, cuzzo. People are generally idiots and you can always tell a person's character by how they respond to stupidity.
I feel ya, I'm workin' on doing more "animating" in my toons. Thanks for watchin' ;). And yeah, I try to keep my cool. 'Cause a lot of times people leave reviews just for the attention or they think it makes the author mad. Heh, I dun care, I just wanna hear from the people who got somethin' intellegent to say so I can improve ma skillz. So thanx for dat, lol
peace out ^_^
Well yeah pretty dam nice! :)
not bad I liked the beginning that was good but then I kind of lost interest but non the less it was magic thanks for making this flash and this sort of thing is just for starters yo your really good you should do more different flashes then this I know you got it. You can do even better eh I hope so but that was even good HB! out!
P.S. Make another show another ending and that will atart another part... maybe part 2 he he? :) plz lol later slayer
^3^maybe I will...ya neva know brotha
Coulda been alot better
The art was the best part of the movie. The voice acting was really good 2. Now 4 the bad part. The animation needed work. There were alot of instances where I couldnt follow what was goin on ( during the fights ). It was too choppy. U goot string them to gether so the viewer can follow whats goin on. Also, u might wanna use better sound effects. the dbz punches 'an stuff didnt go well with the whole feel of the movie. Thats it. I duno if ppl agree with me, but those r my opinions. ^_^
Naw man, I agree, what you're sayin' does make sense. It ain't exactly DBZ I was aiming for and the sounds does have a big factor. I really appreciate intelligent criticism. I will work on it, thanks. The movement too. :)
cool, but uhh...well there could be better animation and stuff...and they dont look very black...
True. But you don't see Asians in real life with blonde, pink, green hair, or big blue eyes, or green or purple, what have you. But you do in anime. Anime ain't about realism. I came up with a different way of drawing ma people, they don't gotta have big lips and nappy hair (okay, maybe nappy hair) but that's why I went with the dreads. As far as Kiara, ain't you ever seen a light skinned black girl before? Just breakin' down barriers ma' man. Thanx for reviewing ^_^
ASTEROID HURLING TOWARDS EARTH!!!
tasty crunch of yummy cookie crumble
Detective Nwar is one day away from retirement.
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.