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My First Sumission to get Front Page!
*yawn* Just getting some practice under my belt. If you don't know who the characters are, watch my other two cartoons (preferably the first one). Enjoy. WATCH ON MEDIUM OR LOW QUALITY!!!
Not too shabby
Kudos, bro. I personally love anime, and I could since a bit of Aaron McGruder-esque influence in your style, especially the facial profiles. I enjoyed the concept and stylization of the characters, although some of the scenes could have used a few more frames. While its not necesarry to draw out every single movement (as you are no doubt aware) there are some points where there the action looses its fluidity and seems to "jump" from one motion to the next without clearly defining what happened in between. Otherwise, great job, and I'd love to see more.
Read through some of the other reviews, and I have to give you props on your level headed responses, cuzzo. People are generally idiots and you can always tell a person's character by how they respond to stupidity.
I feel ya, I'm workin' on doing more "animating" in my toons. Thanks for watchin' ;). And yeah, I try to keep my cool. 'Cause a lot of times people leave reviews just for the attention or they think it makes the author mad. Heh, I dun care, I just wanna hear from the people who got somethin' intellegent to say so I can improve ma skillz. So thanx for dat, lol
peace out ^_^
confusing at best.
long story short cause i already wrote this review once and got knackered by the website. your backstories for your characters are awesome, humorous and just plain awesome... unfortunately they set me up for major dissapointment. i understand time wise you had to move along but there was absolutely zero pathos set for these characters in their situations... slick pictures and dialoque(however badly dubbed) do not a story make. best of luck next time. finish it off too or dont leave two empty boxes in the menu so we dont think is a half finished half game or perhaps half movie lol
aight man, thanx :). But it's just gettin' started, the real story's comin'!
Interesting, and Great!
Fairly interesting idea, Fairly nice layout. Now for the stats...
Graphics: They're pretty good, not the best, but still, anime is tough, mouthing couldv'e been better.
Style: Nice idea, pretty good screenplay. I like the anime style.
Sound: Needs better music, but its pretty good. Kinda repetitive. Mic could be better (but your'e workin on that)
Violence: It's mainly a fight scene, but it could use more demonic powers, and guns. (alyways needs more guns)
Interactivity: Kept me going until the end, could be longer, but its long enough.
Humor: Well, ... cmon...
Overall: I liked it, don't see much anime now n days but I enjoyed it, make more, improve your skills, and become an awesome Anime Artist! Also, I like things like this, with magical demon powers ect.
P.s-YES! I'm Asian, k?
--Dark Trigun out
Thanx! And for the extensive review. It makes things easier to fix later on when people are specific, so good lookin' out ^_^.
that was amazing, make another sir, and this was no bad flash
Thanks man, glad you enjoyed it! ^_^
Pretty good i enjoyed it though a few places could use a few more frames other than that, it was great (however who would be stupid enough to combine crack with demonic powers the useres could potentially gross 10x the value of stuff they steal!)
Poses a good point, I never thought of that! Haha XD
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