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This was made just over a week, and im wanting some feedback please. It's a trailer for a movie that wont be made(dont ask why i made it...)
A well done movie, no doubt. Though the coloring looked a little unprofessional, the animations were above average. You did a lot of small animations and they were pretty life-like too. I had to laugh at the "NOOOO" towards the end of this, that was pretty funny. Overall, the sound effects were great in this and well placed.
You said coming soon, but I don't get it. I thought this movie pretty much wrapped things up quite nicely. What else could you add to this?
Well the whole basis of this flash was hilarious. I found it quite good infact. The character design wasn't to bad, but what lacked in graphics made up for in animation. It was done very well, it was so very smooth I also found. But the ending made me really laugh. Good work on that, and keep it up.
Don't get me wrong, you have a good style of drawing. But you could make it a little more realistic, which would make the whole flash better then what it already is. Also next time you plan to make a preview mention it in the title, so people won't get their hopes up. Haha, great work once again.
coming soon?! Wasnt that the entire movie!?
Maybe you should put more detail before you submit it, because honestly... that was crap.
I didn't like this at all
I don't mean to come across as rude, and forgive me if I am (I have nothing but respect for people who can even make these movies), but I didn't really see the point of it. It wasn't really funny. It had absolutely no story, and the graphics were very substandard. Maybe there's something I'm not getting but I found it pointless. The only constructive criticism I can offer is to never make another flash movie like this again.
Second-Year Animation Film (2015)
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