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Hey all, this is my first flash I've ever made. I tried to put enough effort into it so that it won't look like I know nothing of flash, though. I'm not much of an artist either, so I'm aware that the drawings lack detail as well.

Anyway, this is about some friends and I, based more on a comic series I've worked on for said friends. It's about a minute long, and I think all of the bugs are worked out (except for a couple of stuttered animations I cant seem to fix)

Also, one more thing, my brother is Scott_Falco, who makes Video Gamerz, in case you wanted to know.

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It was neat

It was good nothing too special. Seems like a Copy of The Decline series. It was good but needs a little more work. Dont listen to Cozmo131 he my bro he is a tough critic.

falco1029 responds:

it really isnt a copy. It's based more on the lives of the gamers then the games they play.

K

^^Good Points^^
This had some good humor in it; this made me smile, but nothing too great.

^^Needs Improving^^
This wasn't very well presented. Your animations are not very realistic since they are so slow. Make everything quicker. Your drawings aren't that great either. Try to add more shading and use less gradients throughout your next movie. Also some sound effects couldn't hurt.

eh

it was okay but the animation wasn't very smooth, still, good job.

falco1029 responds:

hmm, i sorta rushed a bit at the end, so tahts probably where the problems were.

good mood

yeah, i was in a bad mood earlier bacause i have seen alot of shitty
flashes lately and this one id definetly above them all!

falco1029 responds:

glad to hear it

Are You Sure?

This Is your first flash this is good compared to the first flashes I have seen. WELL DONE!!!

Maybe you will be a tremendous author in the future keep up the good work!

falco1029 responds:

Comments like that make me feel all warm inside :)

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Nov 17, 2006
4:21 PM EST