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"The Black Bird" Session 2
Once again, VERY nice work! Take heed of the guy below, he's right about the fades ;D
very detailed drawings, and nice story.
a tip for doing fades, instead of making all the objects alpha turn down, just put ablock of wihte, and fade that in and out. that way it won't look like everything turns to ghosts. like when yuo can see the one guy through the roof, during the fade.
Yet again, I am very impressed. The art is great.
pei fu! (Newgrounds doesn't allow chinese caracters so I wrote pin yin)
This is really good
Watching this is like watching anime or a series. Excellent work especially the storyline.
As with the first part, the style, the story, and the overall theme are good. It seemed like a part of the journey was complete, only to be confronted with a sort of crossroads.
I didn't give it a good sound rating because somehow it seemed there was a bit of muffling in the voice acting. Maybe the mic sensitivity was set too high. The music carried itself more or less okay, but the sound effects seemed forced. Probably it happened when the piece was crunched.
Nothing is severely wrong with it. In fact, it's still damn good.
I sat wondering what was supposed to be going on in the story. A few hints are given, but not enough evidence is available to the characters' eyes for them to figure out just what sort of trouble they're in.
Again, I hope to see more of these.
A look at the first day of Lucina in Super Smash
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