Score: 7

"It's getting even better! Keep improving!"

by: JamesStarRunner

date: November 16, 2006

Yep, this is (new) Ratchet speaking I guess. I was glad to help out and grateful for the thanks you put in the summury.

I'll try working on the next set of lines faster when I get them.

This episode has seen a few improvements and I'd like to see it get better yet.

The voice acting is improving (not speaking of myself, but most noticably Sora's actor, Gil has been improving). I finally heard a sound effect for the keyblade, but you still need one for the spin attack, sounds as people/targets are hit, the smaller laser blasts... little things like that will greatly enhance it. As you said already, music is a little hard to manage, but I hope you'll find a way to add it.

Good luck with the remaining episodes!

Score: 7

"not bad"

by: tobycreed

date: November 14, 2006

you say this isn't one of your favorites, yet right now it has the highest score out of all the others. (irony)

anyway; perhaps you should work a little more on your battle scenes, they're a little uneventful. and there was a big volume differnce between the voices again.

Score: 5

"Average."

by: kirkjlandow

date: November 13, 2006

I think you need to replace the guy with a British accent. If it's youself or not I dunno but that gets too much background noise and sounds unnatural. Maybe also some more sprite movements.

Those are probably the only two things you need to change to get a higher rating.

Score: 6

"good. i give it a 4"

by: samus-aran1337

date: November 12, 2006

original, sprites and british people.the 3 things that go into making a mcDonald's hamburger.nice.

OH SHIT!!!!!!! BRITISH PEOPLE ARE WEIRD!!

Score: 8

"good"

by: megamanexe2006

date: November 12, 2006

I liked it. Very original plot