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Woot, 2.78 right now, I'de like to take this time to point out this took me two days straight to make, so I'm really suprised with myself, thanks everyone!*Update* Updated loader.. woot
This is nice
I Liked the idea, but you should have more graphics and make it longer. It would be better then.
out of idle
+ Nice eyes on splash screen
?? Maybe it would've been nice to start with the last few lines from the previous edition?
-- 'Why does...' - so bad a line, it's funny. Cheesy. Making a mockery of the gravity of the situation.
--- Doesn't get us attached to any character.
- Stupid line for assassin at end.
+++ Interesting ending.
The episode definitely makes me wanna watch #3 out of idle curiousity. But the writing's just not strong enough for me to feel myself getting involved.
This is definitely better than the first episode. This episode you actually got into the storyline that you are developing for this series a little more. The sound effects were better and the animations were a little smoother. You've improved a bit since we last met.
Again, I don't really like how you ended this episode, but still I wouldn't mind watching the next episode either.
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lol, like what teh n00b on teh internets
you are like a total n00b, and you are a n00b ands stuffs, n00b.
Whatever n00b, lawl.
It was an alright flash. However, I thought that it was a little to texty.
Watch the first one too....
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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