What?
Going by your Author Comment, there's apparently a story to this. I do not see it at all. The only interaction I shared with this is an ever-so-slight impression of graphics, and even then they could have been better.
However, I do see potential in this through the animation you have expressed and through your graphics capabilities. I would like to see you produce something greater than this, but for now, I can only offer a low score.
Story: 1/10
Interactivity: 2/10
Graphics: 5/10
Animation: 5/10
Length: 1/10
Total: 14/50