not bad one
that was an alright animation. a bit large and therefore, took a long time for it to load up, but it was worth the wait.
Author Comments
This is a compilation of flash projects I made from about 2 years ago and was done in Flash MX and MX 2004
Just so you know before you watch this, the music will cut out b4 the end.
Sorry about that I needed to get the filesize down and I cut it a bit 2 far.
Music is "Bridge 2 Bama" by Soulive
PoeticTheJustice responds:
Thanks for your review sir!
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^^Good Points^^
I can't exactly say what it was about this movie, but it wasn't really as bad as I was expecting it to be. A lot of this was just experimental stuff you made, and mostly just still images, but that is pretty cool, as we got to see some of your good graphical works and some of the not so good ones, and see how you have progressed.
^^Needs Improving^^
The music. It's a great song, I think it fits well, but instead of cutting it off to make the filesize lower, you should compress the music instead. You can get the whole song in and have a fractional filesize. There are tutorials all around NG. One at the bottom of the submission form!
PoeticTheJustice responds:
Thanks for the constructive criticism dude! I can promise you I have improved I'm just working on a flash right now and it's long. Btw my drawings may not be top notch as i only use a mouse (can't afford a WACOM at the mo).
too random
it was ok...but tooo random!!! try to make it longer and less random...but good work anyway!!!!
PoeticTheJustice responds:
haha it was a compilation of old works dude, so it had to be random
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Wow, it's like theres a party in my mouth and everone's invited!!!!!
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