do you have insomniac?
are you depressed?
girlfriend just dumped you?
or are you just bored?
if you said yes then do we have just thing for you!
*edit* i made the timing a little better.
not bad one
Author's comments:
do you have insomniac?
are you depressed?
girlfriend just dumped you?
or are you just bored?
if you said yes then do we have just thing for you!
My comments:
Well, i answered no to all of those... but it was still a cool animation.
i think that this one could've been longer overall, but a nice idea to it and it was cool to watch.
K
^^Good Points^^
The drawings weren't bad, though I didn't like how everything was so blurry. It's kind of humorous how you prescribed throwing rocks at someone as treatment. It probably does work! Animations and music were decent too.
^^Needs Improving^^
Like I said, you should blur so much. It's good to use once in a while, but to have entire scenes blurred for no reason is kind of lame. This also kind of moved too fast. You could probably add some more animations at the end showing how happy these guys become from throwing the rocks.
well i blurred a lot because i wanted it to have that eerie anti-depressant commercial sorta feel.
and it moves fast because commercials usually do... and when i added music i had to edit a lot of stuff so that it would run smoothly.
Nearly there!
Go and change the spelling of prescription, and give us a bit more time to read the text with the small print- I will give you 15 minutes before I vote either 1 or two, before I go to bed (UK time).
It isn't right now, but with those adjustments I would protect it! lol.
I'll assume you can make these chages and give you 5/10 now!
Best Wishes,
Ice
i dont know whats up with the spelling on the portal page because when i went to edit it it was fine.
and the last part was supposed to go by fast... ya know... like in real commercials.
kinda nice, i laughed a bit
but whats up with that overblurring? it got to a point where everything on the screen was blurred, i was checking my eyes through the entire length of the flash, which was actually a very short time ;]
Not bad
You did an excellent job with the animation it's self. It was a bit short, and it could have used some sound, but all in all, I am impressed that you were able to achieve such quality while maintaining a very small file size.