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Sorry for the song cut at the end but i don´t have any sound editing programms.
1 month of work went into my first movie ;)
good first try
for a first animation, it's really not bad. i can see some real potential in future submissions.
but first the problems:
not that much movement
and jpegs look sloppy
good effort though
You can use fading effects and text... the bevel in filters... and you can sort of draw... sometimes....
not much animation.
a lot of repeated scenes also
i gave it a five
just because you used a song by one of the best f*$#ing bands in the world, oh, and cuz it was actually really good flash, great job. ^_^
Crazy but thats its strong point
Nice like the ending its just like real life this movie has a good sense of style keep at it but it would benefit with a little bit of dialogue or subtitles Keep it crazy
The good news: The movie was pretty in sync with the music.
The bad news: All the scenes where stretched too long, making the tween effects too obvious and slow.
All in all I'd say this is a below-average movie, for the above reasons and the fact that I hate emo-type movies =P . In the future, try adding some frame-by-frame animation to add more life to the people.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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