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Due to time constraints and other commitments, the animation and runtime had to be downsized. But enjoy the show anyway! ƒº
Pretty good Georgie...
I know you hate being called George, but anyways... Pretty fucking good if you don't mind me saying so. A little chunky at points but as you said, time restrictions (IPT assignment ;)... Sound was a little, um, terrible. Too bad it wasn't in time for halloween contest.
You could've made that hell gory (give the grave robber a shotgun and let every single body rise!) but the humourous take was quite refreshing. Excellent.
5/5 Vote & 9/10 Review From Randy
It's really plain
I've heard the music a million times and what's the whole thing about?!
All they're doing is running! I think it needs a little more 'doing' like a car chase or somthing.
need more sound effects
the music in the chase scene annoyed me and i think is so over used. and i think there needs to be more sound effects, like when the man shudders or the skeleton hands the paper.
it was funny but a little slow
i couldnt hear what it sounded like but i thought it was funny and a little unexpected,overall good job
Excellent in graphics and style. Sound was great up to the chase scene, but the Benny Hill music ruined the mood and stole a lot of humor from the final punch line. I would suggest moving the Benny Hill music to the end,when the credits are rolling. For the chase, something like Mussorgsky's "Night on Bald Mountain" to help maintain the suspence. Also, I needed more time to read the business card, I missed the punchline the first time. Great punch line, but as I said, the music told me there was a joke coming, so the punchline lost its impact. I thought your chase scene was incredibly good.
I do agree with you on the fact that the music did steal away from the final punch line, but the appropriate music wasn’t available at the time… so I unfortunately had to make do with what I had.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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