Score: 6

"Read plz"

by: Chad-T

date: October 29, 2006

I gave you a 2 -

Graphics - I don't mind sprites at all. It looks like you now how to utilize them almost properly. I like the choices of sprites as well.

Style - I liked you're style a lot (Style to me, means Direction) I loved it. It felt cinematic. Which is what you achieved. Great.

Sound - I would have given this an 8 and even upgraded you to a 3 if you knew how to make the sound fade and use it effectively. Basically meaning - You had great taste in the score. Just learn to fade the music. Also just a little tid bit. I know the song you downloaded for the Mario Brother's Theme, probaly said it was composed by John Williams. But It was not. It was done by Henry Tilton and the London Symphany Orchestra.

Violence - meh

Interactivy - ....

Humor - Okay. So, I can't tell if you were attempting too make this funny or not. If you were. You horribly failed. I would have given you a 0 if I knew it was a comedy - because it lacked any of that. If you're trying to throw in a few funny tid bits here and there - that's fine I guess, but none of it was funny justly. Pick you genre.

I am looking forward to part 2 and seeing you progress sire of the shire.

Score: 4

"This movie is not bad at all"

by: AgentKirbyPuff

date: October 29, 2006

I see what you're trying to get at here, and I liked how you did some of the humor, but some of them weren't quite as funny to me as they should have been. Another problem that I had with this movie was the fact that you kind of killed the flow of the movie by entering ''Made By So & So'' and stuff like that while the movie was going. When you make Episode 2, try to put that stuff in the beginning so it doesn't interrupt the movie. Some parts in this movie moved kind of slow for me too, and a little choppy in some parts as well, but not horribly bad, just needs a Touch-Up in the next one.

Well, I'll be on the lookout for Episode 2!

= AKP =