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-Lone- (Part 1)

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Peter (Jimtopia)

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Date Submitted

10/28/2006 | 12:51PM EST

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Movie | 2 MB

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Current Score

3.40 / 5.00

Score Rank: #33,250
Popularity Rank: #83,766

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Ages 17+ Excessive Violence
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Author Comments

***MEDIUM QUALITY RECOMMENDED***

I had to remove the one I submitted yesterday because there were too many problems with it, but I hope this fixed up one will be better.
Well, here's part 1 of my Lone series. Now, I didn't mess up on that rating, it really does have excessive violence. I just wanted to see if I really could make a cartoon like this, a truly violent one. Well, I really hope you like it, this one took forever to make. Also, if you have a moment, plz, leave a review. I always respond.

© Jimtopia 2006

UPDATES:
-Shuriken Movements Smoother
-Scene Select

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Average Score: 6.9 / 10

Score: 10
Bluetiger6464

"LOL!!!"

date: August 8, 2008

I can't believe uyou added this guy in that one Jim Movie Trailer!!! XD

If Jim had to go up against this guy, he'd be pretty screwed!

Any chance of you making part 2?

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Score: 10
jetxy

"awesome"

by: jetxy
date: August 7, 2008

i chant whait for part2

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Score: 8
Superhyperbionic

"good but slow"

date: March 11, 2008

I like it, but it takes to long to load. keep at it though!

July 29, 2008

Author's Response:

Lol, yeah; big filesize.

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Score: 7
Seargent-X

"moderate"

date: February 4, 2007

graphics- good enough.

style- All i saw was killing... maybe on the next one explain how he got into this situation. All i know so far is that people are trying to kill him but i don't know why. Pretty cool skills he's got though =D

Sound- I liked the music, went well with it. I see you do a pretty good job of timing animations up with the music.

Interactivity- I can relate to the main character...people trying to kill me and such =p

Humor- none, but its not the point

Overall- 7 out of 10. I would have given it a 10 If i knew why people were trying to kill him...

Great work on this. Cant wait till the next one!

Author's Response:

Ah, well I'm glad you liked it. Okay, all (or some at least) will be explained in ep. 2, don't worry about that.

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Score: 7
IceDragon64

"Good"

date: October 30, 2006

+Some excellant graphics, including the reflection o f the blood and the eyes. I got the feeling you were trying out techniques. it worked!
+this gives me alot more confidence in your ability to do Brackenwood, it has some of your best work yet in it.
+Music OK but I would prefer sounds as well
+Interact good but scene select pretentious on something so small
- As for the story, it isn't the greatest- its so familiar on NG to have a hero fighting guys who mostly just stand there waiting to be sliced up.
+ However, it has potential. if you are serious about this project do tell me what you had in mind and I will give you my thoughts.
Best Wishes,
Ice

Author's Response:

Cool, thx for your review, I do intend on deepening the story, don't worry about that. Anyway, thx again.

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