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this is the second forset of dreams. this one is kinda confusing kinda u can probly peace it together i believe in you. please enjoy Forest Of Dreams - Souls Of Our Departed
not bad one
a little bit short, but a cool idea to it, decent drawings and it was cool to watch.
I feel like pushing my ideas onto someone...
Right, time for a review:
The graphics were pretty good. Nothing spectacular at all, but they got the job done. I'm not sure how you could improve them. maybe try something a little less generic next time - for example: make the wolf be wearing a suit and tie. Make the graphics have something that'll catch the eye.
Style: Some nice fbf in a couple of places. Seriously look over your use of filters, layers and tweens though. The filters seemed to be used a lot, and the idea of the blur filter is that you don't see it. Use the blur when you have an obvious foreground and use the blur on the background. It'll move attention to the fg.
The song was fine. I can't tell you how to improve that.
Not much violence. Bleh.
Play button...not sure if there was a replay button as I closed during the credits.
It wasn't funny.
Overall, it seems to me like you're still trying to grasp the basics of flash. Your art's pretty good and you seem to have intresting ideas, however you're not doing yourself justice by repeatedly using MCs and tweems. I'm sure your style will evolve with future projects, I just hope you remember my comments next time.
i guess so
An infernal battle between gold and acid.
Are you feeling it now, Mr. Krabs?
Too much coffee for Pencilmate...!
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