Score: 4
"Well..."
date: October 28, 2006
You seem to have put alot of work into it, but there are noticable parts where little work was done and other parts where more work was done.
You seem to have a good sense of humor, but timeing and when to cut to the next part or a joke seems to need some work. Just standing there watching the guy go "...........yeeeeaaah.............." Gets old and ruins the joke. There were parts where I knew it was funny but could laugh.
The "its aboot real life and has memories of like star wars happening to them" is funny. But they have different color light sabers!!!!!! Your work should be a refection of you, and it showed me your not the biggest star wars fan, or you got lazy.
Its all good but all you really need to do is add a little bit of work here and there. And the back grounds sorta...wernt good. But keep up all the hard work.
