not bad.... needed more

Author's comments:

I made this as a part for a doodle collab, but I was the only one that finished my part.. (I know, I should've put more time into this)

My comments:

Well, the animation was alright... and it was cool to watch, but i think it needed more action to it. i realize its part of a doodle coolab or a future one.. and it does have potential, but this one here needed some more done to it. the time you put into this was very good... it just needed some more done to it overall, that's all.

What i thought...

I thought my self it was actualy going to be 2 doodles actualy fighting.

Next time you make and animation like this, make it longer for one but otherwise its a good flash.

nice

***My review***
This is pretty good. hope to see another one of these in the future.

***Things to improve on***
Nothing. Except it was kinda short so next time make it longer.

***Overall***
A Fun Flash to watch.

Good but not great

I agree with Bezman. Its a good starting point but you really need to expand on it more. I think you should add some decet sound effects and make the stick figure react more. Maby even make it longer then resubmit. So on the whole I think this could be great with more work put in.

it while it

Enjoy the idea of stickmen being placed in strange worlds. My favourite submission is Mr. Coo after all, which you should check out if you haven't done so.

Watched this 3 times.

++ happy ending

+ nice sfx for drawing.

-- The stick-man doesn't really react enough. When he's tussled up, he could struggle or scream. At the start, he could be walking or looking around to see the world he was just born into. He needs more life.

-- Not enough meat. I'm not complaining about the length so much as the fact that when stuff happens you don't really make us feel it. Kinda linked to the above complaint. When the end comes, yes it is a massive relief for him logically, but he doesn't look relieved or anything.

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Though not as great as I'd hoped, I did enjoy it while it lasted.

I hope you keep bringing more stuff out and look forward to future things from you.