Score: 0
"Not too happy with this one"
date: October 16, 2006
When I first came to view this flash I was wanting to see something amazing and great, but what I came into was something I was not ready for nor did I want to see.
The railroad seemed to go on forever! But there wasn't a train in this, unless I missed the train but believe me I tried my best looking up and down and from side to side to see if I could locate a train somewhere in this flash but still ave not came to a train :(.
But there was a moving "t" which I suspect may be something relating to something somewhat like a train. The "t" won't cut it though, I need a real train to be happy with a flash of this kind. I figured you would have put in an amazing train with a lot of wheels and it would be running on those tracks like no other train has before! I wouldn't believe my eyes were seeing such a train! But since there wasn't one I couldn't come to this conclusion and thus couldn't be as happy as I would be if you did have an amazing train in the begining.
I will try my best to cheer for the "t" in its adventure across the track, but it surprises me that it is not on the tracks during the movie.
I do have a question about this movie though, and I really hope you take your time to answer it as I would be completely lost with this flash movie if it isn't answered.
- But when the "t" is spinning around are there people in it? And if so are they getting dizzy?
I am not one who likes being dizzy or being spun around at all so I couldn't imagine what it would be like if I was stuck in some sort of machine like the "t".
Normally I watch flashes as I review them (of coarse I watch them before I review them as well ;)), but the music seems to stop during the movie. The "t" keeps on going to the right but there is no music playing which I am sorry, but had to lower your "Sound" section of this review, maybe if you had it going all throughout the movie I could have rated you higher but the music stopping is not something I will stand for.
The music stopping close to the end is what saved you though! I may have even gave you a 1 if you had stopped it any sooner to the beginning! Lucky men you are (I assume you are both males, if not please accept my apology :)).
The style was not too great if I do say so myself, I have seen quite a bit of movies like this in my time, although I have yet to make something of this flashes nature I know many others have journeyed down the path of making a flash similar to this flash's structure.
As a compliment to you I would like to say the image at the beginning is kind of neat, a bit sloppy but I am guessing that that is the style you were attempting and may or may not have been used to how you would illustrate such an image. I hope you don't take offence to this but I am not liking it too much, sure it is kind of neat when you first see it but my lasting impression of it does not go well with other images of this style so I had to rate you low a bit in some other categories as I feel the drawings/style are very important to a flash's score.
Not too colorful, which saddens me as many colors bring joy to my heart and make my world so colorful and happy. But this flash did not include many colors, and the ones that were contained in this flash were all that of a shade of black, whether it be darker or lighter. Next time use some colors! Maybe you will make a good score or maybe even an awesome one!
That would give me quite a surprise to see you submit something in the future of this nature but have it as colorful as you can create! Bring joy to the world with your flashes! Bring happiness to the unfortunate! Bring peace throughout the world and being a new journey in helping out the civilizations across the world. I may not be able to point you in the exact right direction in this small review but I am sure with some of the wording in this review and your knowledge you will be able to come up with something the whole world will enjoy! I will be waiting for the flash and will be sure to review it! However if I do not see this new flash please be sure to tell me!