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This is a trailer of the chacter of a Book-Man - a superhero of sorts who's powers are of yet to be described. Can it be assummed that for every book he reads, the knowledge is absorbed? I think that with future work, there should be more of an explanation of what the story is about. I understand that the purpose of this trailer is to just showcase your future work. I would also recommend some touching up in various parts, like make the characters more complete and touch up the outlines. Some cleaning up of the backgrounds would be beneficial as well.

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Looks like things are coming together

I like it.

You have a great amount of suspence created and you still are holding your own style. I can't wait to see the final product.

Long live Bookman.

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i HEARD MSN MESSENGER

I'll let this one slide.

Seems like you've got a cast, some directorial idea and story sorted out, so I'll give you kudos for that.
But if youintend on making a series I'd suggest improving on your art and definately on the animation before beginning, because, and I don't mean to be mean, just mean to be necessarily harsh, no one will watch it. And that's the whole point of submitting to NG isn't it?

Nice try, work hard and give us something good.