Sabre, an underground organization, created a weapon of mass destruction. that weapon is called the infinity unit. It can act and feel exactly like a human, but it's a thousand times more faster, stronger, smarter, and deadlier.
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This is my first submission and first serious flash attempt, but dont get the wrong idea...it's not some crap animation.
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This is the beginning to a series I'm making called project infinity. Its pretty much just meant to explain what's going on and show some of the characters and stuff and get some input from people before I make more. Tell me what you think :P
this is good shame...
shame its a little short tho i can understand why you have made it short so not everything is revealed at once. i am definitly looking forward to the next in the series. this is good for ur first flash especially the sound usually thats were most first timers go wrong but you've done great. good luck in the series!
nice one
you say that this is the start of a series, eh? this looks like it'll be a great series. this animation was very nice, it definitely shows promise. a very nice concept to it, good graphics, good audio, nice entertainment and it was fun to watch.
if you do continue this into a series, then i look forward to seeing more.
thanks for the review
I'm working on the second one as we speak
Glad you liked it :)
Pretty Good start
This is quite interesting, actually. You leave a lot of questions, like who the first character is, sitting in the rain (on the tower), who/what Sabre is, and if the 2nd unit is Omega.
In the debriefing, it was stated that 'another infinity unit was created to recover arkrayn.' or something along those lines. Then, it was stated 'that's where you come in.' While everyone can draw the line between Omega and the unit getting the debriefing, you never actually specified that the guy we see is Omega, the 2nd infinity unit. This is really nitpicky, but for some reason it bothers me.
As far as leaving a lot of questions, though - that can actually be a good thing. While confusing at first, it will definitely draw viewers who are curious about the first episode to see the second episode.
Overall, that's a pretty good job.
Yea I didn't put in who Sabre is into the cartoon, however it IS in the description lol :P Also, considering the only other infinity unit is the black one you see in the beginning, and the voice says "hello Omega" to the 2nd infinity unit, it shouldn't be too hard to figure out who Arkrayn is, or at least I hope lol
Thanks for the review!!:)
Interesting
Yes, very interesting. And you have picked a very good theme for it as well. I will eagerly await the next episode of this series. Though, hopefully by they you can improve your graphics a little bit, unless you are aiming to wow us with geometrically shaped characters facing off in epic battle.
yea I just recieved a pen for my wacom because my old one broke so now Ill probably feel more comfortable doing more than geometric shapes :)
I was actually thinking about having like anime cutscenes during fighting and stuff or something like that.
Nice start I know I will be waiting for its sequel
This was quite interesting. I pretty much figured that Arkrane is the cyber ninja outside in the opening sequence. Now is sabre human members of the infinity team or other infinity projects? That was a bit more unclear.
The other thing mission objectives for machine don't usually need an intro they would have it programed. Although the view would benefit from this it does not make sense for a computerized being to need human based instructions.
Yes but the audience are not machines, therefore I found it most suitable to do a human based briefing lol. Sabre is the organization running everything, not just project infinity. project infinity was just one of their many creations. More of their creations will be displayed in the next episode :)