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This is my lil ol' cartoon I made in the depths of mah house. I hope you all enjoy it.
*Low quality Recomended!*
I was realy surprising about the remix of ( Voyage, Voyage).
Do you speak french ?
By the way this flash it's not bad, so I think you can make another work without Mario or Nintendo style.
I dont like this genre much and I don't like the lack of sounds, but there is a proper story and some good 3D style images in it.
English not too bad but heres a list of small points in the order I found them through the story:
mushroom kingdom/Mushroom Kingdom; heavensa ; pease/please
saftey/safety; bowser/Bowser (often) realy/really; toad/toad
You might get better scores if you tell us more in your notes. Then those that don't like sprite type movies etc will be more inclined to avoid it, leaving you with more of the people who like this kind of thing. Personally, I view anything anyway and judge as I see. 6/10 is a good score from me for the genre.
i havent creamed my jeans this much since the last time Carmen Elektra gave me a lap dance
Could use some improvement
Not a bad sprite flash. A few pointers: grammar, faster walking sprites, better speech bubbles (perhaps speech captions along the bottom of the movie), and a little faster story. But I really liked the 3D backgrounds. Aside from that, keep truckin.
this flash definitly shows promise...
but youve got some stuff to work on. I loved the use of different perspective like the fighter bay and the kingdom village when they met toad. Also, the use of sprites for things other than their original design, like using bullet bill launchers for monitors on the bridge and making fighters out . Now, definately use sound throughout the flash next time...and try to work some mario music into a mario flash :P Also if good call to not use voices if you think that it might mess up the flash if not done right, but if you arent going to use voices then make it so we dont have to click every time to advance the words. Keep working at it! I await the continuation.
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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