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Well this is my first flash movie with voices. It's pretty funny a bit of a school joke that I thought I might share on my site and on newgruonds. Be nice with the reviews" ;)
well, the animation was alright, but i think a lot of its potential was taken away because it was so short... which is a real shame because there wasn't really all that bad, it was just too short. for your next animation, add some more length to it and it should help you out.
The ducks were funny at the start, the voices were really good i was suprised, the duck scene made me laugh that buttons to move to the next text started get anoying make it bigger, but from tis flash it was good and made me laugh which is what i think it should be doing.
That was really funny, my only suggestion would be to turn down the volume somehow when that person yells, because it sounds really scratchy, other thatn that it was really funny, make another animation, maybe about a farmer that keeps having his crops stolen or something, take care..
Needs a little sharpening...
...and sadly, I live in an area where drivers are that inconsiderate. Running over farm animals. The one catch is, hit a pig, those things weigh like 300 pounds, they gonna seriously screw up anything that hits 'em, much less the bull. And that is no bulls***.
ok, so you have potentiall... i think. thats probably putting it nicely but there are many, many things that need to be fixed. for one, grammar was a huge issue here. two, if your going to make a movie with a joke from school or whatever, make sure you give us the background info first so we can understand it. three, if you use voices or text or anything of the sort, animate the mouths, even poorly is fine. and on a final note, pigs dont make pork, they are pork.
Yeah I know pigs are pork but I just added that in to make the driver seem under educated
Pilot for my new show!
A story about a worm, a beetle and a very hungry bird…
New video for you to watch, while we wait for the next plague to happen...
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