The story could have potential.

The storyline wasn't anything too new or exciting, boiling down to a basic revenge plot (from what I could tell), but it seemed pretty cool. However, the artwork and animation were just plain horrble. 3D animation can look great... if you can do it properly. But when the shading constantly flickers and everything looks scratchy and unrefined, it takes away from the viewer's experience. Drastically. The animation was choppy and slow, and while watching it I felt nothing. I think 2D animation would be much more effective for something like this, as it can portray emotion better, 3D just seems too artificial, expecially when done like this.

I know this is "old" and "unfinished" but if you are going to use 3D, learn how to use it better before trying to undertake a project such as this.

Definatly potential in this flash.

I can definatly see this flash become somthing much more entertaining.
The fact that the poor effort to take on a 3d flash somewhat ruined the movie though.
There was no sky, sloppy shading and the buildings had no features such a windows, they were mearly shapes, like a child would play with. Maybe this is a video for children. but i don't think that is what you were aiming for.
Even though you said it was unfinished, is that really an excuse to produce a peice which has hardly an outline at all and retarded graphical effects? I think not.
Also, the whole style of the flash was obviously ripped off from other actuall films, which is why i gave that a 3.

Although this piece was dissapointing, as such, i see potential in your animations and some good storyboarding and plots. try harder and you'll definatly have some front page daily and weekly gold features on NG.

(P.S. just for the record, don't submit unfinished flashes)

You never fail to impress!

Impressive work Sub. You never dissapoint man .

~Ozoneocean

very good animation

Author's comments:

an old unfinished project.

My comments:

One question: do you plan to finish this project??? i sure hope so because this animation was nothing short of brilliant, and i mean brilliant.

Great

this was really good.
5/5