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^^Good Points^^
The concept isn't terrible, I think you just didn't execute well at all.
^^Needs Improving^^
The voice overs and sound effects were really annoying in this movie. MJ's voice was just bad acting, you definitely need to work on that by mainly getting a better microphone. The graphics were pretty bad too. You used very crude methods of detailing your characters, and overall it just turned out distracting.
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