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This is my first submission in newgrounds.
This movie is 3-4 months old but I'm pretty proud of it.
((( OK )))
Well this was interesting, i thought the "BLEEDING EYES" wa a nice touch, but overall this was a neat little animation but does need some sorta effort from the backrounds to the character art...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More detail and effort is needed...
Funny but needs more to it...
like the person said before me, the only thing you need to improve on is making the movie longer and making the stick figures differable.
Make the movie longer!
This was great and from this movie you seem like the type of Flash maker that could be great! Make the movie longer. As for the stick figures, People can usually tell them apart, but there are some who can't, try making one gray.
Nice, but it's too short and you can't tell the two sticks apart. Maybe make one of them grey? And could you make the movie longer??
better than naruto
Pretty good, but the ending was kinda weak. Add more violence.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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