Yeah, too short
Pretty good stuff but WAY too short. I can't give you a good score for 3 seconds of animation.
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the reason this movie is displayed in such a small window is because of the space taking blur effect that make the movie look decent. and i am sorry for the shortness
apparantly there are viewers who just don't understadn how much work i put into this. hell, look at the deailed backgrounds, look how darn well the whole thing is put togetter.
ah... newgrounds people are ignorant.
this took me 4 hours. most people here have never touched flash.
too short
The content seems great but it's too short even for a trailer, try hitting 30 secs or so and you will get some nice scores
Ehh...
Dispite the fact I can tell you have put time and effort into what is here, it simply isn't enough to be rated all that high.
Also, 4 hours is nothing, try 4 months or 4 years, that is a lot of time to put into an animation, 4 hours is basically just the blink of an eye in the animation world.
I would say add about another minute or two on and it would definately be worth having in the portal, and would probably be rated fairly high.
One last point, with a trailer you are supposed to get people excited for an upcoming animation, give them an idea of what it's about, get them prepared for what is coming. This is basicaly just a quick action snippet where truth be told it's near impossible to see what is going on. Who is the guy firing the gun? What is he firing at? Why do we care? Should we care?
These are all things that need to be addressed in a trailer. Good luck in your animating future.
Nice Spelling!?!
You spelt coming wrong in the video, you put "comming 2007", but thats besides the point, it looks pretty damn good
Too short.
Please make it longer. But overall, i think its nice
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3.33 / 5.00
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