Score: 4
"I see potential here."
date: May 4, 2008
I would like to see this re-done. They are very interesting, with a unique story, but they aren't very well done, to be honest. The stylized look of the second and third loading screens would do well as the style for the entire thing, it would probably make it quite easier to animate and would definitely look better over all. The subtitles of the third one would have been very helpful to have in the rest of them, that was a real plus for that one in specific. And, if you need voice actors, you can ask people on here, on the Portal, for help. Some of us would be glad to help you, I'm sure. The music is excellent, even better if (as you say) It's all original. In all, I gave it a four (as a review) and a 2 (score). But that's only in its current form.