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Sep 21, 2006 | 3:27 PM EDT

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So here's my first flash, and it shows the five Teknoborgs that will be futured into my new Flash series, ''Teknoborg Unlimited'', of which I hope to be making soon, and show to you all here on newgrounds! While voting, please keep in mind that this is my first flash! also note that there are no sound effects in this movie, only background music. Don't worry tough, there will be sound effects in the true series! Enjoy!

Reviews


ForsakenGatemanForsakenGateman

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars September 22, 2006

Nice Job

It was a good short movie.BUT it left nothing to answer.First i thought thinking of the aliens who where destoryed but then thought "It would be a long time before thats answered.Maybe as a plot twist or something."Then u answer it.You know?


totghelyr responds:

Yes, I know I left almost nothing to answer, but that's because you now think you've seen the whole plot. But you haven't! What you've seen is the basis for the whole series, but it's only about 1% of the whole story. The thing you should ask yourself now is ''what will happen once the war breaks out?'' Please don't judge the series by the trailer, since the trailer shows actually nothing about the whole goal. But thanks for reviewing! ^_^


ibboliaibbolia

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars September 21, 2006

Eh...

It really could use some work. I don't know what else to say


totghelyr responds:

I know it needs some work, but I only have a week of flash expierence, so trust me, it'll get lots of work in the future! thanks for reviewing! ^_^


koolthursdaykoolthursday

Rated 2 / 5 stars September 21, 2006

Work on the content

You obviously put effort into this, and your flash skills are functional enough to get a pass from me, but your ideas are so cliche I literally laughed at them, and not in a good way.


totghelyr responds:

Wel,, I'm glad you do appreciate it! I only have a week expierence with flash, so that's the reason they don't look too good I guess... And maybe you'll think my idea's are so cliché, but please wait with that judgement until you see the actual thing, since this shows nothing compared to the real story. The trailer shows ''the begin'' of it all, but thanks for the review! ^_^


Gannondorfs-bitchGannondorfs-bitch

Rated 4 / 5 stars September 21, 2006

It's not too bad.

A lot of work needs to be done, especially on the drawing, but if you can improve it. You should be able to get a decent score with this.


totghelyr responds:

yes, I know! but at the moment I have a week of expierence with flash, so don't worry! It'll improve a lot before the first episode actually will see the daylight! thamx for reviewing anyways!^_^