good but one thing
i am thinking about buying koolmoves but is that logo always in the back?
i like the layout of the tutorial though
Author Comments
Thank you very much everyone this is its year anniversery of my tutes thought i would max it out and thanks for the support.It is finnaly fixed the small texts and music have been revised,the buttons are also fixed.
(( Notbad ))
~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i sorta liked it, has a decent look and easy to understand, could add more design to it though, improved interface is what i mean, also some size redcution could also help out.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Size reduction, and more effort on the layout of it.
~~OVERALL~~
Interesting idea, kinda neat.
~X~
tTLight-SephirothTt responds:
:)
...UMM...
~ I use KoolMoves too, and I can honestly say that you ARE NOT the best person to be making a tutorial for KoolMoves. No offense intended whatsoever. First of all, the music started when you went to the 'Information' page. Not great. Also, the 'Motion Script' button was different shade then the rest of the buttons. Also, you didn't have a pre-loader, or a 'PLAY' button. Sorry. ~
{ 1/5 }
.frenZy.
tTLight-SephirothTt responds:
its ok i understand
decent
Well, I was on the fence weither or not to blam this or protect this..I decided since you did alot of work that you deserved to be on newgrounds. I voted and then a flash came up saying "You're the saviour! You are one of a number of people who have helped keep this entry in the Portal! "...so i guess you have been protected in the vote....congradulaations
....i still want to know what your flash is all about though because i was confused
tTLight-SephirothTt responds:
Thanks man i really appreciate you being this flashes saviour it is about helping noobies not make retarded flashes like stick.
Nice graphics but bad organization and bad grammar
Whilst the graphics in the spinning 3D cubes and other nice little effects was nice, it didn't save the tutorial from all of the poor grammar and sentince structure.
This tutorial was hard to read. Sentinces had dangling modifiers, plural verbs were used in place of singular ones. Although I'm not senselessly strict about small grammar mistakes, the grammar errors here inhibited effective understanding of the text.
So, when making a tutorial. Remember to proof-read your writing so its understandible. Good luck in the future.
tTLight-SephirothTt responds:
Ok i understand thanks man
