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Sep 19, 2006 | 7:00 PM EDT
  • Daily 2nd Place September 20, 2006

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Author Comments

In this chapter , the White Gorilla is confronted with Naca , the dinosaur witch ( also brother to T'Char who he had killed in part 4).She wants revenge and the demon sword he took from his brother so she brings a possessed beast ( Tor ) to vanquish the gorilla.

Reviews


Ringwraith1Ringwraith1

Rated 4 / 5 stars September 20, 2006

Really good but the sounds...

I agree with the last person about the voices. You should spend a bit and get a mic, cuz that monkey sound didnt match the words at all. And one glitch, the preloader goes over the boundries, try and fix if you can, not a big deal really. Other than that, it was really good. But ya, get a mic, or a friend with one, or someone with a great voice for the characters. Keep up the good work!



HaravikkHaravikk

Rated 4 / 5 stars September 20, 2006

Sound could have killed this

The sound really brought this down, it was all crackling and far too loud, I usually don't have to turn my volume down for a flash =(

The animation, fighting and art however were awesome as ever though, and redeem it. Though I'm still not a fan of the female characters being just coloured humans with tails when the males are animal through and through, it just seems...wrong. Almost like beastiality when they're meant to be the same species, kinda destroys the idea that they're not human if they look far too human I think =P

But yeah, still need work on the sound, but the animation is still great. I'd suggest changing the style of the female characters, but that's not a biggy, just personal opinion


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SLYSTER12SLYSTER12

Rated 5 / 5 stars September 20, 2006

:O wow

Words can not express beauty in this cartoon.
Please keep the good work.
10\10

5\5



the-adthe-ad

Rated 4 / 5 stars September 20, 2006

Another good one!

Man, you're just cranking them out, aren't you? Good job! I like this one, but not my fav. The sound near the beginning always is too loud or something.

DrJim...uh...stop talking. You can already..kinda see that stuff on the green lady dinosaur-type thing. Speaking of which-

This is what bugs me. Like, the males are accurate depictions of what these animals would be like, walking upright. But the 'females' are totally weird. They look like women with fur and tails superglued onto them. I just find it weird and inconsistent. Oh well. Btw, im not turned on by animal cartoons, kinda creepy, son.

Anyways, keep up the EXcellent work-
8/10



DrJimDrJim

Rated 4 / 5 stars September 20, 2006

best yet

the beginin was very good, wit the music and script i realy dont like ur style but the story is desent, the fighting is disent and, try making smooter animationg. will some desent animator make a porn parody ofthe green chik, i would love to see dat!!!!