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Sep 18, 2006 | 2:16 PM EDT
  • Daily 2nd Place September 19, 2006

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Author Comments

**UPDATE** Wow! Daily 2nd, totally not expecting that. This was just something for a class using Aftereffects, not Flash. Still, very cool. Thanks to everyone who voted. I like the critiques I'm getting and just might use them to make the commercial better, maybe change the song and use something from the audio portal so then it wouldn't have any copyrighted material and then actually see if this could be used as a commercial. That would be sweet.... hmm... I wonder what it would take...? :D

This was a class project. A 30 second only commercial for something. And well, I decided to do something for Newgrounds since its been very kind to me as of late.

So here you go Newgrounds. My gift for you! (and it got me a good grade to! :D)

Reviews


ChaosDude05ChaosDude05

Rated 4 / 5 stars June 19, 2008

This rocks.

The commercial is cool and I wish IT COULD GO ON T.V!!!!!!


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JoaxxJoaxx

Rated 3 / 5 stars June 17, 2008

Could Have Beemn Better

Its Okay, But Too short And Too Much F


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GyzomeGyzome

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars June 10, 2008

Great, but could do with a little bit improvement

It's great, but there were some things that could be better according to me. First of all, a commercial about a website usually mentions the website's URL, yours did not. Second, it wasn't clear that it was about a flash portal. Sure, everyone who knows about flash knows the typical flash icon, but the biggest part of the audience doesn't. Third, the music. It sounds... Old :S ... And Newgrounds is supposed to be a pretty modern site.

For your next "commercial", try to use different music, use something from the audio portal or my advice, use the Newgrounds main page music. (You know, the one played in NG.BYTESIZE, Endless Handbag Loop from FDA). Put a clear refference to www.Newgrounds.com and make clear that it's a flash movie and games website/portal.

By the way, these are the only negative aspects that I could find. If I'd look this hard for details on any other submission, it'd take me days and I wouldn't have enough characters to put it in one review. I only did this because I felt this was already great and could use just a little help to get to the top.

Peace out,

Gyzome


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Tyguy80sTyguy80s

Rated 5 / 5 stars June 7, 2008

AH HA

Very great no other way to say it,Why don,t you put it on youtube or something,I bet it will help get users.



TrixiaoyuTrixiaoyu

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars May 12, 2008

I gave this submission a vote of "4"

Short, but very good animation. I'm still puzzled: Was this done in flash or swift 3D?