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theres no way i can type in a right answer in the beginning part, is there?
Author Comments
this was based on a series of paintings I did (which were based on sculptures I made) .the last section with the bodies isn't actually from the series, but I didn't have alot of time, and everyone knows it doesn't take long to make a big pile of bodies when you have a giant robot car :). the intro was ment to be seperate, but I got a better mark this way ^^. anyways, at some point, I'll fill in the actual ending (and begining scenes), possibly even using scans of the real paintings (by the way, the blue guy's name is "Strobe")
instantdeathin321 responds:
haha, no.
but if you think about it, it makes sence, because your hand doesn't get spread all over untill you use up all your tries
I didn't get the riddle, but..
What was name of that song the lady was "singing" towards the end? And who sang it? Would you mind telling?
instantdeathin321 responds:
"Demascus" by Conjure One
r0r0r
Wow. Totally ruined by the riddle.
But over-all good. What you were thinking with the riddle, I will never understand.
instantdeathin321 responds:
well it says in my explenation. I got a better mark if I put them both together, lol
Agreed; lose the riddle
This flash was bad the first time you submitted it. Adding a sound track at the end doesn't make it better. Well, it does, but not enough to justify resubmitting it without changing anything else. If, as you wrote the last time you submitted it, this is not the flash you intend for the long run, then stop submitting it.
If you want to make changes, try rethinking the whole flash. I didn't blam it the last time, because it looked like it took some effort. But realistically, it is too short, there is no story line, and if you hadn't left the disclaimer last time, I would have assumed you did the whole thing to justify a picture of bleeding bodies. The fact that you added to it and resubmitted it without removing the bodies leads me to believe that I was right the first time, and that this flash really is an excuse to publish a pile of bodies. If it's not done, don't submit it half -assed. If it is done, just stop submitting flashes.
instantdeathin321 responds:
nono, the first one was completely a mistake, I sent the wrong file
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Lose the stupid riddle at the beginning
instantdeathin321 responds:
god damn, don't you read the author's description? but yes, when I create the next version, the riddle will be repaced by a new play button