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At the bottom of the sea is a robot bent on destruction, when it initiates, someones gonna get hurt.
Im still learning the ropes but this is my best animation so far, it took about a week to complete, so i hope it was worth it. enjoy :D
P.S. Reviews would be appreciated.
i hate to say it but this flash wasn't really good huh. One week is a bit rushed for this sort of thig if your going to submit it on the site, it would have been fine about 5 or 6 years ago but nowdays when ppl see this sort of work it just isn't impressive anymore. You keep saying that the plot is in the description of the flash but the movie should still make sence even without it, it's to hard to follow and the fact that the "Robot" fly's to the island kills just one person and nothing else then destroys the entire thing seems kinda pointless and rushed. The best part of the flash was the music it did suite the movie. for a first attempt this would be....ok i guess but it is not up to the standard that ppl expect for this site. if you want to improve spend more time on setting a plot and makeing the film try to add some voice acting rather then just playing music in the backgound.
not bad man. this animation actually had meaning to it. you used alot of good effects, and the camera angles helped alot to understand what was going on. the music fit perfectly too. the art was decent. if you continue making more flash im sure your flashes will improve alot. keep it up
thanks alot mate, the art was half decent yeh, but i can really see the huge change of quality from my first flashes, thanks for the review, and responding to mine,
It was pretty okay. I like evil robot fighting action movies. There was some good camera movement. And this was probably the first movie I have ever seen that had a good use of shape tweens without makeing it look stupid.
The graphics definantly werent that great. Way to simple. Also the animation wasnt smooth or have much fbf. And everything was colored with to much gradients. And I had a hard time figuring out what was the point.
your all right,like shape tweening smoke, ugh horrible, but you also right about the the bad, thought i did fbf for the blood and the plot was in the authors comments. thanks for the reviw, they all help :D
that was original
ok. good first
Rockets don't work underwater, no free oxygen. What are the robot's reasons for tearing out human spleens? (nice sound effect there by the way!) Cool weapon! maybe some post destruction images..?
It was only an animation, and i think it woulnt look as good without the flames, answering your secon query the robot is a mental thingy (check authors comments) and er maybe, thanks for the review.
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