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That Evil bunny is serving donuts...but wait till you see whats in them.
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This was odd and different from what i noramally see on the portal, the heads were funny and the doughnut scene was ok but besides that there was not much to it, seemed like an intro more then anything though.
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Add more animation and not so random.
Interesting flash somewhat random though.
I protected it because...
it tells a story and it has all the basic elements of an acceptable flash, but I didn't like it much.
the voices were poor, the animation was basic the wobbly bits were irritating and the pace was too slow in parts. I would never have guessed that it was an rabbit if you hadn't told us it -needs the two big teeth. I don't see why the rabbit spoke at all.
I don't see why the woman pulled the doughnut (which looked more like a chocolate eclair) in and out of her mouth.
having said all that, Ive seen much worse and the basic idea is OK.
I gave you a 3...
because I got 1 laugh out of it. When the second guy was "eating" his doughnut :p
for next time. The voices could of been better.
It's da pizzaboi.
I keep on having this reoccurring dream, where Tobey Maguire watches me eat cream.
Good things do happen.
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