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This is based off of a comic a once wrote. If it is well like by the public then I may finish it. Took a nice while, sorry about some of the messy spots. The credits have a fun thing in it, so you can stick around for that.
truthfuly i think this is the best animation ever made by a female i liked the idea i thought it was rather funny and i like that style of charecter. good job.
A stunning effort
The storyline did it for me, also, the humor was well executed but may appear to be shallow to some. Anyway, you did a good job portraying your characters.
I liked the main character but too bad he died...unless you're planning to resurrect him in the next installment? You should definetly engross in the making of the next episode or create a series to this. You get an overall 10 for your effort.
I could tell a female wrote this...
...there's actually a plot and the dialogue is tolerable.
By the way... very sweet.
Very, very sweet.
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Aha! I was right!
I agree, dry humor. But I like satire, this was better handled than most submissions that come through here. I'd like to see this worked on a bit harder, there were some sound problems (basically the volume needs to be equalized a bit more.) The graphics were actually not that bad, but could use a little work. I voted five because it looks like you tried on this and I want to see a finished version of it.
good job, all the necessary elements were covered, and passable voice acting, though u might want to get your sound levels balanced up between each characters voice.
- the manly wife character was funny, as was the mum.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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