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Tears of war: I have been working on for a while know and Iam really happy with the outcome of it I hope you like what I have made. This is my real first animation that I thought should go on newgrounds and yea I hope you like it enjoy
this was a pretty good first animation and they way you designed it was nice to
The idea is good, but it's a bit messed up. Like when he walks up the path, he's just hopping. The shading was good though. And i think you mentioned it wasure first real flash, if thats right, then its very good for ure first one and i think you have potential. Keep on working :)
it was ok
i couldn't vote for it even though i did see it, the gravestone didn't make sense because it mentioned ww2 and the person died 1987 even though on the clip the person looked in his 20's so that was wierd espicially since he was given an military title despite the facts he's in his 60's plus he is a privat despite all the service that was strange
Not too shabby, just keep workin' and learnin'
Not bad. Not bad at all, and you should be proud of the quality for a first animation.
Just a couple pointers:
The theme was relatively serious, and the animation was not. It seems that type of animation is better fit for a comedic atmosphere. To achieve the level of catharsis you, I assume, are looking for, a more serious style is needed.
It was very short, and it ended very abruptly. Every story, whether with words or no, a music video or no, needs the following things: an introduction, a conflict, a climax, a resolution, an ending. Some of these can be very subtle, and the 'resolution' doesn't have to be happy or even, well...resolved. By 'resolution', I mean the audience should be left being satisfied that they have indeed watched an interesting story.
Other points are pretty good. Like I said, keep learning! You're bound to do great things in the future!
not bad at all
That was pretty cool for a first time animation keep at it. you can only get better.
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