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This is the first movie in a long line of sprite movies. Produced by: Lt Darkshot,In association with Connemara Productions.
sprite movie,but somehow less
im not a fan of sprite movies, and becuase i have checked out another of ur flashs and also found it lacking, i thought it appropriate to look at some of the others that you have uploaded, to determine if i had been overly harsh in my estimation of your abilities.
the previous reveiw reminds me that although this animation was uploaded from one source, multiple sources exist as to it's creation so as follows
sprite creation 8/10
idea for the animation 6/10
construction and layout of the animation 7/10
I was quite dissapointed you slowed and lowered the the song, without me knowing, let alone, asking me. It was OK, altho it needed quite a bit of work to it.
What can I say? I love Chromehounds!
Advance Wars + Chromehounds + Sprite = Instant Win in my book.
Bad things first:
A few grammar mistakes here and there.
Lots of text.
Repeating background music.
Long story = confusing.
Wimpy characters (the boss dies in one shot?).
And now, the good things:
Everything else. ;-)
Keep up the good work, guys! Is voice acting possible in the next one?
Rather than getting your viewers to read, you should have put that first part into the script...maybe have the leaders of one of the forces talk about it, rather than get us to read it all, because it really didn't catch the attention of the viewer very well...also try to work a little on the animation a bit better next time.
WAY too much reading, and you have to be chuck norris to read that first part that fast.
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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