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This is not supposed to be Epic or Amazing...
This is just a simple loop that I made for a Flash-Animation class.
The requirements were to make a seamless looping flash with a central object of focus.
You don't HAVE to vote 5, but just don't blam it. It didn't hurt you to watch it.
Got to say... The styles didn't match... the background looked realistic while the buildings looked cartoonish ... adding the cat XD... Nice texture on the plane *smiley face*... oh yeah, that clock in the background was TOO fast XP... Is it just me or did the cat's eyes move as the plane went by? Nice job on the windows making it possible to see the landscape in the background but make the view from the windows more glassy and make the house and cat look more realistic ;) I only just started flash and both of my animations got blammed :( I only learned how to draw with the pencil tool and how to make keyframes and that's all... no tweening, no shape effects, nothing... so everything had to be handrawn and it was hard :(... however, yours passed and i congratulate you for passing on a simple loop! Loops got the power XP
((( ENTERTAINING )))
Notbad, it could use some sound though, but was neat seeing it fly through all the buildings and stuff, you should also make it cause some chaos or something anyways it was amusing...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
make the plain cause chaos like hittint the cat or something...
Funny flying plane...
~ This wasn't that great. First of all, it had no sound, which isn't a very good thing at all. Also, it got kind of boring after a while. Also, you no pre-loader or 'PLAY; button, and it's a loop! (Right?) I guess the graphics and style were pretty good, though. ~
thanks for the honest review. however a lot of what you commented on was Obvious.
including: the no sound, no pre-loader/play button, the loop part.
next time you review i would appreciate something that can't be seen from merely watching the movie and stating the obvious.
it was good, really, it is made better than some shit here novadays, thanks for showing another future Frog! (frog from LegendaryFrog)
wow... that's one of the best compliments i've ever recieved.
thanks a lot!
That was really boring, who really wants to watch a flash with a paper airplane just doing the same cycle over and over again
thanks for the complex review.
i appreciate such a complicated analysis that says something besides what is purely opinion or obvious from the video.
once you have some credentials (more than one flash posted) i'll listen to your insults.
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